I can see affection shining through his eyes
how even if he fails, he always tries
to do everything he can to catch my attention
and with his kisses he eases away all my tension
so hard to speak he tries… but he only barks and cries…
Day 4 of the poetry challenge – Limerick, enjambment, theme – imperfection
Edit: I reckon I should write something about the challenge, but I don’t really have any insights in particular. I saw the challenge too late. I have never tried writing a limerick and when I read its just a five line poem, that did seem like a challenge, because I am so used to writing longer poems. Even the acrostic challenge for that matter posed the same problem. But its still is so much fun participating. Perhaps this one is way silly, but hey, a girl’s gotta try.
Well done. I am also very late with my submission. I have no idea how my time zone compares.
Thank You 🙂 Well, there is definitely a lot of difference between our time zones at least, because it say you commented 13 hours ago, whereas I wrote the poem less than an hour ago 🙂
There is no time limit except to do all we can before the course ends. This is really nice!
How cute – poor doggie 🙂
Cute twist at the end. It’s good. I’m better with short n silly poems myself. I’m still working on mine so you’re in good time.
Thank You. Short poems are turning out to be fun too. All the best with yours 🙂